Tuesday 23 July 2019

A momet in a time


My moment in time.

I saw people as tall as me roaming around telling people where to go.

I felt the anxiety in my stomach as I walked slowly down the hall way.

I heard the conversations around me and I can hear the silence the further I go down.

I smelt the clean air from a distance away.

I wondered would I stop ever stop going to the hospital over and over.

Tell me about what did you do on the holidays? 

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora. I am Sophia from Matawai School.
    It’s great that you commented about your holidays. Well done. I had a pretty boring stay at home type of holidays.
    I really like the sentence, ‘ I felt the anxiety in my stomach. ‘
    I learnt that you had a nervous feeling in your stomach, as you didnt know what was going on.
    Maybe next time you could add more description about what you did at the hospital.
    Why did you have to go to the hospital?
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Sophia

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